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Tuesday 10 May 2011
Homework for 16th May
Write a story plan for "It's a knockabout". It's only the plan that I'm interested in!!! You don't have to write the full story, only one or two sentences for each picture on page 124, L.B.
Sara Kaminski Part1 Stacey and Steve are looking at a TV program. Her father sees the newspaper.
Her father saw a document that the favorite football player of Stacey and Steve come to play at the match.
Stacey and Steve say"Dad we can go"her and his father says ¡yes!. Part2 Satacey and her family go to see the math.It is too interesting Vialli its goingto send the ball to the goalkeper.
The ball hits on Stacey head.
PART3 The doctor says that old is good Brent and Vialli go to the hospital to give a present to Stacey. Stacey puts too happy.
PART 1 -Stacey and her family were in there house. Here father were reading the news paper . -The father tell the children that it was a mach. The mother said if they want to go. -The children ask to here dad. And then they go to the match. PART 2 -They were happy to go to the match. They have beautiful scarves. -The player thouw the ball. The ball hit to Stacey. -Stacey was scared. Here parent and here brohter were scared. PART 3 -Stacey wake up on the hospital. Here parents were very happy. -There were to mans in the door. One boy has something. -The boy give something to Stacey. Stacey was very happy.
PABLO’S HOMEWORK IT’S A KNOCKOUT Stacey, Steve and their mother are watching TV. Her dad is reading newspaper. Her dad saw that Brent and Vialli are going to play in a football match. Stacey and Steve say her dad that they can go to the match and the dad says yes. They go to the match and the two teams not scored a goal. Vialli catch the ball and he run to the goal. When he kicks the ball and the ball zoomed to Stacey’s face. Stacey woke up in the hospital and the doctor says that she doesn’t break any bone. Brent and Vialli walked inside the hospital and Stacey smiles. Then Vialli gives Stacey the match ball.
PART 1: The dad is reading the newspaper. Stacy and Steve are watching the tv. Dad tells that Denston Rovers came to the town. Steve and Stacy was very happy. Steve and Stacy saied to there dad ‘can we go’?. Dad said yes we go.
PART 2: The family was in the match .They have a scarf of the Denston Rovers. Vialli send the ball to the goalkeeper.But the ball hits Stacy in the head.
PART 3: The nursy said Stacy that her head is good. Her mum was few worried . Vialli and Brent went to the hospital. Vialli said’ exciusmi ‘and STACY said ‘don´t worried. Vialli give to Stacy the ball with the names of all the boys in the stadium. Stacy was very happy.
PART 1 The broters Stacey and Steve are watching TV . Their father said that he had seen that his faborite player were coming to their town . Their wanted to know what their father had seen in the newspaper . PART 2 Her family was watching the mutch in the speech. The player went to the goal. The ball went to Stacey´s head. PART 3 Stacey was in hospital.Her family was happy because she was right. The players went to the hospital. The players give her a present.
Two children are watchin TV with their mum. Her dad is seen the news papper.The dad said to the children that their favorite football player is coming to their twon.The children says to his dad that they want to go to see the match.
The family go to see the match.Vialli go to the goal with the ball.The ball hits Stacey in the head.
The family go to the hospital the doctor says that the head is good.Vially give to Stacey the ball.Then Stacey is good.
PART 1: The dad is reading the newspaper. Stacy and Steve are watching the tv. Dad tells that Denston Rovers came to the town. Steve and Stacy was very happy. Steve and Stacy saied to there dad ‘can we go’?. Dad said yes we go.
PART 2: The family was in the match .They have a scarf of the Denston Rovers. Vialli send the ball to the goalkeeper.But the ball hits Stacy in the head.
PART 3: The nursy said Stacy that her head is good. Her mum was few worried . Vialli and Brent went to the hospital. Vialli said’ exciusmi ‘and STACY said ‘don´t worried. Vialli give to Stacy the ball with the names of all the boys in the stadium. Stacy was very happy.
PABLO’S HOMEWORK IT’S A KNOCKOUT Stacey, Steve and their mother are watching TV. Her dad is reading newspaper. Her dad saw that Brent and Vialli are going to play in a football match. Stacey and Steve say her dad that they can go to the match, and the dad says yes. They go to the match and the two teams not scored a goal. Vialli catch the ball and he run to the goal. When he kicks the ball and the ball zoomed to Stacey’s face. Stacey woke up in the hospital and the doctor says that she don’t broke any bone. Brent and Vialli walked inside the hospital and Stacey smiles. Then Vialli gives Stacey the match ball. THE END
Part 1 Dad is reading the news paper. He said that tomorrow it will be an interesting football match. Steve and Stacey ask his father if they could go to the match.
Part 2 They go to the football match to see it. A player will shoot to scored a goal, and ... the ball hits Stacey in the face.
Part 3 Stacey is in the hospital. Two players come to visit Stacey at the hospital. They give a present to she.It´s a ball! She is too funny.
Please, try again! You have to make clear what is Part 1, Part 2 and Part 3. You can write titles or just separate the sentences in different paragraphs. Come on, separate the sentences, make sure you have a minimum of 9 and a maximum of 18 sentences and post the work again.
The family stay in the living room,dad read the newspaper. Dad show the newspaper at the family. In the newspaper was saying that would be football match and they loved football.
Part 2
The family go to the football match,with scarves. One football plyer shoot. The ball and the ball go to her face,the ball hit in the face.
Part 3
She go to the hospital.And the football players go to give a present.The football players give the present to her,the present is a ball that signed to all the players.
It”s a knockout Part 1 One day dad was reading the newspaper. And he saw that their team went to play in the town. The children said to their dad that they want to go. Part 2 The y went to the match. One player hit the ball. And the ball hit Stacey”s head. Part 3 Stacey went to the hospital she has no broken bones. Then her two favourite players go in the room. The players give she a present and she put very happy.
Part 1 Her father has reading the newes papers. He said that tomorrow there are a interesting match Then Steave and Stacey ask her dad that they could go.
Part 2 Next day her family went to the match. But when will go to her goal Vialli ran past the defender easly and kicked the ball at the goal.
Part 3 And go to Stacey face. Next Stacey go to the hospital. The doctor came and said there are two mens outeside . Finally the two mens go inside of the room and give Stacey a ball.
ÌT´S A KNOCKOUT Part1 One day the dad was reading a newspaper and two children saw the TV with their mother. Dad said that Italian’s player’s come to play here. The children ask dad to see the Match.
Part 2 The next day they went to see the match. One player hit the ball very strong to score a goal and the ball hit Stacey’s face When.
Part 3 Stacey was in the hospital the doctor said that the x-ray was good and then she said:”two men want to see you”. The two men come in to see Stacey they are two Italian team’s player Stacey went to her house to play with the match ball.
Part 1 It´s a knockout The father is reading the newspaper and Stacey and Steve are watching the television .And the father said they are playing here the Denston Rovers. Stacey asked to their father if they can go to the football match. Part 2 They are encouraged to Vialli and Brent ,then Vialli shoot the ball to the stands. Then the ball hits on Stacey’s head. Then Stacey she faint on the floor. Part 3 Stacey have an X-ray and the doctor said no are broken bones. Then Vialli gives a present for Stacey. Then Vialli said you’re are a funny girl. Daniel Rodríguez Blasco 4-C
The family where in there house,the father was reading the newspaper. Dad read that Brent and Vially will go to play a mutch in their town. Stacey and Steve ask their father if they can go to see the match.
The family go to see the match. When Vially go to scored a goal the ball change the direction,and hit Stacey on the face.
The family go to the hospital and ask the doctor if Stacey is good,she say yes. Then Brent and Vially go to see Stacey and ask if she is good. Finally Brent give she a fotball ball that is sign all the players,Stacey is VERY HAPPY!
PART 1 One evening Dad was reading the newspaper.Mum said "Have you finish with the newspaper yet" "I have just start with the sport section" Dad said. Dad tells to the children that their favourite football players (Brent and Vialli)come to their town to play football. Stacey and Steve were very excited. Stacey and Steve asked to Mum and Dad to go to see Brent and Vialli play football.Dad acept to go to see Brent and Vialli.
PART 2 The family go to see the match.They take sit and see the fantastic match. Vialli goes to the goal kickes the ball and the ball goes to the crowd and hits Stacey on the head.Staceyfells into the floor.
PART 3 Stacey wakes up into the hospital.The doctor came with an X-ray and say "you are a lucky girl and there are two boys behind the door". The door opened and Brent and Vialli apeard. Vialli said "I'm sorry".Stacey was very sourprised. Viali gives a present to Stacey.I is a ball with the sings of all the players of the italian team Stacey was very happy.
PART 1 One day two brothers were watching TV. Her father was reading the sport section. The brothers asked to dad "they can go to saw a football match." Dad said "o.k"
PART 2 The family went to the match. Brent had scored a goal. But the ball picked in Stacey's head.
PART 3 She went to the hospital. The doctor said "You haven't broken any bone." Brent and Vially went to her bed and give him a present. The present was a footboll ball!
Mónica López said... part 1 Dad was reading the newspaper. The father said that he saw four free tickets for the football match.Stacey and Store conviced dad. Part 2 In the match a player tried to score a goal but the goal-keeper threw the ball. The ball hit Stacey on the head. Stacey went to the hospital. part 3 One day villi and Brent visited her and they give Stacey football as a present.
Part1 Stacey and Steve are looking at a TV program. Her father sees the newspaper.
Her father saw a document that the favorite football player of Stacey and Steve come to play at the match.
Stacey and Steve say"Dad we can go"her and his father says ¡yes!. Part2 Satacey and her family go to see the math.It is too interesting Vialli its goingto send the ball to the goalkeper.
The ball hits on Stacey head.
PART3 The doctor says that old is good Brent and Vialli go to the hospital to give a present to Stacey. Stacey puts too happy.
PART 1 -Stacey and her family were in there house. Here father were reading the news paper . -The father tell the children that it was a mach. The mother said if they want to go. -The children ask to here dad. And then they go to the match. PART 2 -They were happy to go to the match. They have beautiful scarves. -The player thouw the ball. The ball hit to Stacey. -Stacey was scared. Here parent and here brohter were scared. PART 3 -Stacey wake up on the hospital. Here parents were very happy. -There were to mans in the door. One boy has something. -The boy give something to Stacey. Stacey was very happy.
Part 1 Steve's and Stacey's dad was reading the newspaper.The dad saw that in the sport selection they selected a mach.Steve and Stacey asked her dad if they can go to the match,and the dad said yes. Part 2 When the family are in the seat Vialli ran towards the goal.Vialli launch the ball,but the ball hit Stacey's head. Part 3 Stacey wake-up in the ospital.The nurse said that Stacey didn't broken any bone.Brent and Bialli come to give a present to Stacey.The present is a football's ball.Stacey and his family are very happy.
Sara Kaminski
ReplyDeletePart1
Stacey and Steve are looking at a TV program.
Her father sees the newspaper.
Her father saw a document that the favorite football player of Stacey and Steve come to play at the match.
Stacey and Steve say"Dad we can go"her and his
father says ¡yes!.
Part2
Satacey and her family go to see the math.It is too interesting Vialli its goingto send the ball
to the goalkeper.
The ball hits on Stacey head.
PART3
The doctor says that old is good Brent and Vialli
go to the hospital to give a present to Stacey.
Stacey puts too happy.
PART 1
ReplyDelete-Stacey and her family were in there house.
Here father were reading the news paper .
-The father tell the children that it was a mach.
The mother said if they want to go.
-The children ask to here dad.
And then they go to the match.
PART 2
-They were happy to go to the match.
They have beautiful scarves.
-The player thouw the ball.
The ball hit to Stacey.
-Stacey was scared.
Here parent and here brohter were scared.
PART 3
-Stacey wake up on the hospital.
Here parents were very happy.
-There were to mans in the door.
One boy has something.
-The boy give something to Stacey.
Stacey was very happy.
PABLO’S HOMEWORK
ReplyDeleteIT’S A KNOCKOUT Stacey, Steve and their mother are watching TV. Her dad is reading newspaper.
Her dad saw that Brent and Vialli are going to play in a football match.
Stacey and Steve say her dad that they can go to the match and the dad says yes.
They go to the match and the two teams not scored a goal.
Vialli catch the ball and he run to the goal.
When he kicks the ball and the ball zoomed to Stacey’s face.
Stacey woke up in the hospital and the doctor says that she doesn’t break any bone.
Brent and Vialli walked inside the hospital and Stacey smiles.
Then Vialli gives Stacey the match ball.
PART 1:
ReplyDeleteThe dad is reading the newspaper. Stacy and Steve are watching the tv.
Dad tells that Denston Rovers came to the town. Steve and Stacy was very happy.
Steve and Stacy saied to there dad ‘can we go’?. Dad said yes we go.
PART 2:
The family was in the match .They have a scarf of the Denston Rovers.
Vialli send the ball to the goalkeeper.But the ball hits Stacy in the head.
PART 3:
The nursy said Stacy that her head is good. Her mum was few worried .
Vialli and Brent went to the hospital. Vialli said’ exciusmi ‘and STACY said ‘don´t worried.
Vialli give to Stacy the ball with the names of all the boys in the stadium. Stacy was very happy.
PART 1
ReplyDeleteThe broters Stacey and Steve are watching TV .
Their father said that he had seen that his faborite player were coming to their town .
Their wanted to know what their father had seen in the newspaper .
PART 2
Her family was watching the mutch in the speech.
The player went to the goal.
The ball went to Stacey´s head.
PART 3
Stacey was in hospital.Her family was happy because she was right.
The players went to the hospital.
The players give her a present.
Two children are watchin TV with their mum.
ReplyDeleteHer dad is seen the news papper.The dad said to the children that their favorite football player is coming to their twon.The children says to his dad that they want to go to see the match.
The family go to see the match.Vialli go to the goal with the ball.The ball hits Stacey in the head.
The family go to the hospital the doctor says that the head is good.Vially give to Stacey the ball.Then Stacey is good.
PART 1:
ReplyDeleteThe dad is reading the newspaper. Stacy and Steve are watching the tv.
Dad tells that Denston Rovers came to the town. Steve and Stacy was very happy.
Steve and Stacy saied to there dad ‘can we go’?. Dad said yes we go.
PART 2:
The family was in the match .They have a scarf of the Denston Rovers.
Vialli send the ball to the goalkeeper.But the ball hits Stacy in the head.
PART 3:
The nursy said Stacy that her head is good. Her mum was few worried .
Vialli and Brent went to the hospital. Vialli said’ exciusmi ‘and STACY said ‘don´t worried.
Vialli give to Stacy the ball with the names of all the boys in the stadium. Stacy was very happy.
PABLO’S HOMEWORK
ReplyDeleteIT’S A KNOCKOUT Stacey, Steve and their mother are watching TV. Her dad is reading newspaper.
Her dad saw that Brent and Vialli are going to play in a football match.
Stacey and Steve say her dad that they can go to the match, and the dad says yes.
They go to the match and the two teams not scored a goal.
Vialli catch the ball and he run to the goal.
When he kicks the ball and the ball zoomed to Stacey’s face.
Stacey woke up in the hospital and the doctor says that she don’t broke any bone.
Brent and Vialli walked inside the hospital and Stacey smiles.
Then Vialli gives Stacey the match ball.
THE END
Part 1
ReplyDeleteDad is reading the news paper.
He said that tomorrow it will be an interesting football match.
Steve and Stacey ask his father if they could go to the match.
Part 2
They go to the football match to see it.
A player will shoot to scored a goal,
and ... the ball hits Stacey in the face.
Part 3
Stacey is in the hospital.
Two players come to visit Stacey at the hospital.
They give a present to she.It´s a ball!
She is too funny.
Daniel,
ReplyDeletePlease, try again! You have to make clear what is Part 1, Part 2 and Part 3. You can write titles or just separate the sentences in different paragraphs. Come on, separate the sentences, make sure you have a minimum of 9 and a maximum of 18 sentences and post the work again.
Part 1
ReplyDeleteThe family stay in the living room,dad read the newspaper.
Dad show the newspaper at the family.
In the newspaper was saying that would be football match and they loved football.
Part 2
The family go to the football match,with scarves.
One football plyer shoot.
The ball and the ball go to her face,the ball hit in the face.
Part 3
She go to the hospital.And the football players go to give a present.The football players give the present to her,the present is a ball that signed to all the players.
It”s a knockout
ReplyDeletePart 1
One day dad was reading the newspaper.
And he saw that their team went to play in the town.
The children said to their dad that they want to go.
Part 2
The y went to the match.
One player hit the ball.
And the ball hit Stacey”s head.
Part 3
Stacey went to the hospital she has no broken bones.
Then her two favourite players go in the room.
The players give she a present and she put very happy.
Part 1
ReplyDeleteHer father has reading the newes papers.
He said that tomorrow there are a interesting match
Then Steave and Stacey ask her dad that they could go.
Part 2
Next day her family went to the match.
But when will go to her goal Vialli ran past the defender easly and kicked the ball at the goal.
Part 3
And go to Stacey face.
Next Stacey go to the hospital.
The doctor came and said there are two mens outeside .
Finally the two mens go inside of the room and give Stacey a ball.
ÌT´S A KNOCKOUT
ReplyDeletePart1
One day the dad was reading a newspaper and two children saw the TV with their mother. Dad said that Italian’s player’s come to play here. The children ask dad to see the
Match.
Part 2
The next day they went to see the match. One player hit the ball very strong to score a goal and the ball hit Stacey’s face When.
Part 3
Stacey was in the hospital the doctor said that the x-ray was good and then she said:”two men want to see you”. The two men come in to see Stacey they are two Italian team’s player Stacey went to her house to play with the match ball.
Part 1
ReplyDeleteIt´s a knockout
The father is reading the newspaper and Stacey and Steve are watching the television .And the father said they are playing here the Denston Rovers.
Stacey asked to their father if they can go to the football match.
Part 2
They are encouraged to Vialli and Brent ,then Vialli shoot the ball to the stands.
Then the ball hits on Stacey’s head.
Then Stacey she faint on the floor.
Part 3
Stacey have an X-ray and the doctor said no are broken bones.
Then Vialli gives a present for Stacey.
Then Vialli said you’re are a funny girl.
Daniel Rodríguez Blasco 4-C
The family where in there house,the father was reading the newspaper.
ReplyDeleteDad read that Brent and Vially will go to play a
mutch in their town.
Stacey and Steve ask their father if they can go to see the match.
The family go to see the match.
When Vially go to scored a goal the ball change
the direction,and hit Stacey on the face.
The family go to the hospital and ask the doctor if Stacey is good,she say yes.
Then Brent and Vially go to see Stacey and ask if she is good.
Finally Brent give she a fotball ball that is sign all the players,Stacey is VERY HAPPY!
Homework by David
ReplyDeletePART 1
One evening Dad was reading the newspaper.Mum said "Have you finish with the newspaper yet" "I have just start with the sport section" Dad said.
Dad tells to the children that their favourite football players (Brent and Vialli)come to their town to play football. Stacey and Steve were very excited.
Stacey and Steve asked to Mum and Dad to go to see Brent and Vialli play football.Dad acept to go to see Brent and Vialli.
PART 2
The family go to see the match.They take sit and see the fantastic match.
Vialli goes to the goal kickes the ball and the ball goes to the crowd and hits Stacey on the head.Staceyfells into the floor.
PART 3
Stacey wakes up into the hospital.The doctor came with an X-ray and say "you are a lucky girl and there are two boys behind the door".
The door opened and Brent and Vialli apeard.
Vialli said "I'm sorry".Stacey was very sourprised.
Viali gives a present to Stacey.I is a ball with the sings of all the players of the italian team Stacey was very happy.
THE END
PART 1
ReplyDeleteOne day two brothers were watching TV.
Her father was reading the sport section.
The brothers asked to dad "they can go to saw a football match."
Dad said "o.k"
PART 2
The family went to the match.
Brent had scored a goal.
But the ball picked in Stacey's head.
PART 3
She went to the hospital.
The doctor said "You haven't broken any bone."
Brent and Vially went to her bed and give him a present.
The present was a footboll ball!
JAVI
Mónica López said...
ReplyDeletepart 1
Dad was reading the newspaper.
The father said that he saw four free tickets
for the football match.Stacey and Store
conviced dad.
Part 2
In the match a player tried to score a goal
but the goal-keeper threw the ball.
The ball hit Stacey on the head.
Stacey went to the hospital.
part 3
One day villi and Brent visited her and
they give Stacey football as a present.
Part1
ReplyDeleteStacey and Steve are looking at a TV program.
Her father sees the newspaper.
Her father saw a document that the favorite football player of Stacey and Steve come to play at the match.
Stacey and Steve say"Dad we can go"her and his
father says ¡yes!.
Part2
Satacey and her family go to see the math.It is too interesting Vialli its goingto send the ball
to the goalkeper.
The ball hits on Stacey head.
PART3
The doctor says that old is good Brent and Vialli
go to the hospital to give a present to Stacey.
Stacey puts too happy.
PART 1
ReplyDelete-Stacey and her family were in there house.
Here father were reading the news paper .
-The father tell the children that it was a mach.
The mother said if they want to go.
-The children ask to here dad.
And then they go to the match.
PART 2
-They were happy to go to the match.
They have beautiful scarves.
-The player thouw the ball.
The ball hit to Stacey.
-Stacey was scared.
Here parent and here brohter were scared.
PART 3
-Stacey wake up on the hospital.
Here parents were very happy.
-There were to mans in the door.
One boy has something.
-The boy give something to Stacey.
Stacey was very happy.
Part 1
ReplyDeleteSteve's and Stacey's dad was reading the newspaper.The dad saw that in the sport selection they selected a mach.Steve and Stacey asked her dad if they can go to the match,and
the dad said yes.
Part 2
When the family are in the seat Vialli ran towards the goal.Vialli launch the ball,but the ball hit Stacey's head.
Part 3
Stacey wake-up in the ospital.The nurse said that Stacey didn't broken any bone.Brent and Bialli come to give a present to Stacey.The present is a football's ball.Stacey and his family are very happy.